Have you ever given a character your interests? If you enjoy archery,
or bird watching, or even just shopping, do you give any of those traits
deliberately to your character? My main concern for this is that we end up
putting too much detail into the character’s hobby, making it quite dull for the
reader. Fantastic, so you love aquariums, and so does your protagonist, but
after you’ve described your ideal fish tank in detail, (including the colours
of each fish and the wattage to the latest water pump,) how many readers would
still be reading?
I am ashamed to say that it took me three attempts to read ’40,000
leagues under the sea’. This was due mainly to the page upon page of detailed
descriptions of the deep sea dwelling creatures that appear for only a second,
just to be described, before they disappear again. I know that authors are
trying to give a realistic view of their character, or of the location, but how
much detail is too much? I honestly felt, with the previously mentioned book,
(as good as it was, because aside from this, it is still a good book.) I was
reading an encyclopaedia of under-water occupants.
Many authors I meet give their characters interests that they are
themselves interested in because it helps them connect with the character more.
This little detail helps the author get enthusiastic about what they’re writing
and allows a 50,000-100,000 word manuscript to be written with some ease. But
tell me what you think.
Read, follow, comment and enjoy. M x
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